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wow ! i really liked it, espcially the way the observer came out in the end, you should definitly go on with this, its really good !! please tell me ...

hey, i liked the story and im really looking forward to more. i like your characters though you should make it clear about warren's actions. in some places i felt ...

hey, that was nice an i really liked it. i liked your characters but somehow some characters like esme and robert cullen seemed too much like the twilight characters, try ...

hey buddy here. okay that was really good but i think you should make it longer. are you planning to expand it ? cause to me if you did this ...

hey, buddy here. i like this story that you wrote. but no more talk let me get down to the critque: i'll just just list down on some main points ...

hey there , i liked the way you wrote your story. but whatever i get right down to the point. my review: - the introduction you started off with as ...

hey buddy here, okay so its like a really long time since i reviewed anything but here goes hope i haven't gone rusty. -first of all i'm sorry to say ...

hey there, Thanks for letting me know that it was out. I was waiting for it and no I haven't forgotten what it is about. My review is as follows ...

wow, this was really lively. like how can i say it, you're description was very good. the way you said i could picture it. one thing i have to say ...

hi there, never seen your work around basically cause you're new, but i have to say that you are good. here is my review as follows : well, i mostly ...

overall it was good. though i would seriously say that poetry is not your thing, it just wasn't meant for you. i think you should keep on writing stories(romantic fiction ...

thanks for letting me know that this chapter was out. i was really looking forward to it. the part about sexual references, thanks for the warning ! overall it was ...

Prologue The girl ran through the wet ally. Her white-stained-brown track shoes squelched on the ground as she ran. She looked over her shoulder quickly. The man was still chasing ...

This was pretty good, and as a fan of the harry potter series, I like to read this kind of stuff. However, other than the mistakes already pointed out, There ...

it was sooo good. where did you learn to write like that. it was too good. the line which i really like was : Ethereal music floated across the water, ...